tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6667661390544628635.post3183177750061740705..comments2023-09-08T17:08:59.982+01:00Comments on Victor Ugoo Njoku Blog: Anytime we do not believe in one thingVictor Ugoo Njokuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03317518373548061148noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6667661390544628635.post-44895149409913534462015-07-07T14:36:39.030+01:002015-07-07T14:36:39.030+01:00Thanks so much, tiencepay. I appreciate your comme...Thanks so much, tiencepay. I appreciate your comment and don't forget to come back for better reads.Victor Ugoo Njokuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10163622433767959365noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6667661390544628635.post-78152220985188675152015-07-06T17:56:50.386+01:002015-07-06T17:56:50.386+01:00the language makes me laugh, especially because my...the language makes me laugh, especially because my transparent mind can see through it- into a transition from your illiterate narrator to a literate writer who plays God to create the characters. So, basically, your god role is unconsciously lenient in the sense that she makes some very correct statements in the course of her narration.<br />I think something is missing somewhere along my read though.<br />what it is, i do not know. <br />could it be better? i think- yes. <br />But then i think this is what a good flash fiction does to you- to know something is missing only because you want more. Good job.tiencepayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17234000093346444332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6667661390544628635.post-63618767739954691422015-07-06T16:00:29.544+01:002015-07-06T16:00:29.544+01:00the language makes me laugh, especially because my...the language makes me laugh, especially because my transparent mind can see through it- into a transition from your illiterate narrator to a literate writer who plays God to create the characters. So, basically, your god role is unconsciously lenient in the sense that she makes some very correct statements in the course of her narration.<br />I think something is missing somewhere along my read though.<br />what it is, i do not know. <br />could it be better? i think- yes. <br />But then i think this is what a good flash fiction does to you- to know something is missing only because you want more. Good job.tiencepayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17234000093346444332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6667661390544628635.post-88960344309839623292015-07-06T15:52:51.297+01:002015-07-06T15:52:51.297+01:00this is a beautiful read,
the flow has got the ki...this is a beautiful read, <br />the flow has got the kind of energy that makes me want to know what happened next. <br />tiencepayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17234000093346444332noreply@blogger.com